Watch the Clouds ~ haiku
(c)copyright 2009 Bonita M Quesinberry
The trees are confused
elements have gone awry
He is at the door
Author notes
Of these end days, prophecy indicates that the elements will be such as we've never seen, and so it is; God also says of these days that "even the trees are confused" by the elements. And, John tells us of these days that "Jesus is even at the door" and Christ told us to watch the clouds for His return.
In a list
A contest entry
- Contemporary Haiku by Harrisham Minhas.
525 points, ended January 21, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Bible-ku!
First time I saw you do a Bible-ku Bonnie! Nice job...a lot is confused now for sure! Love everything about this! All the best in the Contest.
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Actually, I have done "Bible-kus" before, just not posted here. Of course, I'd never heard spiritual senryus called Bible-kus until you, Sis. But, I'm so glad you like "Watch the Clouds." You might want to read "Times of Elemental Signs."
Oops, and I misspelled Prab's name when I suggested you enter some of his contests. It's Prabhudayal Khattar. Many of my entries have clearly stated "Christ" or "His Christ" and so forth and some of those have been winners! So get your buns in there.
Okay, I'm going offline for a short while. Still not well but Annette prayed a really strong healing prayer for me, so I'm expecting to improve.
Back later!
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Thanks for your entry:
"The trees are confused
elements have gone awry
He is at the door"
This is an interesting write.
Thanks again.
Harrisham Minhas
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Thank you, Harrisham, for accepting my haiku into your contest. Best wishes, for there is a lot of talent here at A/P; so, I know your job of judging will be a tough one!
Luv & hugs, BonnieQ
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You're welcome and thanks a lot.
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HE will take care of the tree and the confusion will not be there. The faith is the element which makes things done. Indeed a touching sentiment.well done.
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Thank you, my darling friend! Actually, this haiku is quoting scripture prophecy of these end days. . . well, a bit paraphrased. Even the title is a piece of scripture. AND, you are so right, for HE will take care of everything precisely when it should be done.
Luv & hugs, BonQ 
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For so few words, this packs powerful emotions and images!
best wishes in your contest
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Thank you, Jan! As the scripture tells us of these days, "Jesus is EVEN at the door!"
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Powerful and yes He said the signs and wonders are to be there up in the Heavens watch for them, so yes it is in the clouds to watch. Blessings.
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Thank you, Sis, for the encouragement! As the prophecy tells us, "Jesus is EVEN at the door." Yoohoo!
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