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Don't let this fire

Last night in California
The smoke rose so high
I called to check up on you
To see if you were alright
The message was the same as always
Leave your message number, name, and reason why
I said "Darlin' all I've got to say...
"Well just call me back today"
The fire spread so quickly
I didn't know what to think
I haven't heard your voice in ages
Tears fell each time I blinked
The TV said so many had died
My messages stayed unanswered
So I grabbed my things and decided to go for awhile

Yours was the only one I dialed that night
Fifteen times in a row
Your voice seemed so distant
Your voice a memory lost in time
I prayed and prayed
All night long
"LORD please don't let this fire take him away"

You weren't there to greet me as you always did
A warm embrace, a long loving kiss
All that's left was dust, ash, and brokenness
Darling' all I have to say is
I called for you and nothing happened
I cried for you but you never appeared
I thought that was the way life ended
In that moment I wished you had just disappeared
'Cause if the flames has taken you right there
I would've fallen to my knees
Cried out my misery
Taken the breath from within me

This world seemed to end that night
Your soul seemed to have taken it's final flight
Roads of love never tread-ed upon
Your voice so faraway
And your body far gone
I prayed and prayed
All night long
"LORD sorry to lose hope but please don't let this fire take him away"

You stumbled onto my front porch
The moon lighting up like a flaming torch
"I'm sorry I didn't call you but I left my phone behind"
Tears fell as I realized it wasn't a dream
"Darlin' all I've got to say is
"Your here now and that's all that matters to me"
Your traveled over earth and stone
Flames behind you, all alone
Now your here beside me
let me hold you
Let me give you the breath within me

Fires, flames, possible goodbyes
Took the hope, the faith from me
Your heart's so close I can touch it
Your love's so close I can feel it
You were there with me in the end
And just about the time you went to bed
I fell on my knees, Prayed and prayed
"Lord I'm sorry for giving up, Thank you for not letting this fire take him away"

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  • Jocelyn.Jaded
    January 13
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    This is amazing. I loved the emotion, the way you pened it, and the way it flows. Amazing poem.


  • AwesomeJoshsome
    January 13

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    It's a lovely write, smoothly shaped to flow well. Full of emotion, as if you've lived it. Fires in California are common so it even makes sense! Fantastic! I can't imagine how hard it would be to marry a firefighter...