Please little lady don't you go
I'll be here for you don't you know
Give me a chance don't take the wrong road
Don't sell the devil your soul
I can help to make you happy
Just let the bad out and you will see
You've wondered away and started to drift
Your feelings right now are set adrift
A few more steps and you'll be gone
It'll be to late before long
Let me whisper to you in your ear
I'll pick you up you must not fear
The times though the're hard can mend quite well
Please dear one don't end up into hell
My wish for you is for prosper and gain
Listen to me now let me take away your pain
Come back to me and we'll get through
And I will always and forever be there for you
Author notes
I chose the first picture prompt.
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INSPIRING
Beautiful reminder that He Is always with us in every situation and circumstance. He is so faithful. very moving write. Thanks for shaing this with AP -
Very nice. It seemed like song lyrics. I kept trying to think fo the tune that would go with it. Best of luck in the contest.
Mike
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A little forced is rhyming here and there, but overall a nice write. This is good and you used imagery well here. Everyone sees something different in a picture, and you've painted a picture of ones true love and hope amongest all the turmoil. Take care and good luck to you too in this contest.
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Very nicely done. Good luck to you, and thanks for entering our contest.
Novy & Brazos -
Related a lot to this
Could have written it to a loved one.
Good luck
Hugs, Moon
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nice job, only found one thing- The times though the're hard can mend quite well, you forgot the y in they're. good luck in the contest
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Very good! I really enjoyed reading this fine work.
Good luck in the contest!
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This really hit me hard, it really did. It brings back a lot of memories for me and it really made me think of all the 'what ifs' 
Blah, I'm rambling.
As for the poem, your rhyming was done well although it was a tad forced in places, but it was a good strong poem full of emotion and truth. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Take care
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That's the definition of love, true love. Giving of oneself always willingly and to help your lover over the roughest times. Unconditional and a plea to let them know you want them to stay always.
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thanks you for your comment, i too like your interpretation of the picture, good luck
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