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Godplayers and Millennia

 
 
 
 
 
 
They have lived for thousands of years
under the suns and clouds of others
 now it has come to madness
 
aided by those in the West
who grant
forgiveness and power
in their errant godplay
 
spurring the imperialist delusions
of weak tyrant would-be's
just out of the stone age
 
their aggressive acts of indiscriminate bloodlust
to be defended against
 
where offense is the best defense
 in spite of the protests
of the godplayers
from the West
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    January 13

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    An intereasting take and one that really makes the reader think. Thank you for entering it in my contest and great write.