She loves lime greens,
I obsess over blacks.
Her life's far from my scene,
Yet somehow it attracts.
Her story's are new,
While mine seem bland.
She's been with few,
While my dimes make a grand.
Everything about her,
Seems to fascinate.
Everything about her,
Seems to frustrate.
Her friends are like pestilence,
Mine are like fire.
I hold no resistance,
To seek my curious desire.
From my attempts to detach,
To her over-emotional side.
Nothing seems to match,
Except the love we share inside.
Author notes
Option one - Damnednforgotten
A contest entry
- Opposites Attract by amysticwriter.
2300 points, ended January 14, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for entering, but not what I'm looking for at this time.
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this is really good babe! i love it
its great!
thanks for entering and good luck,
~*Princess Cuddle Bug*~ -
a nice piece thanks for sharing
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dude i really like it...seems to be ever so true.....
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May your love for each other, see you past all other obstacles...very nice poem...
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Wow...wonder where that love will end..

Keep me informed will you..
Good luck in this contest
XXJeannette


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beautiful is all i can say!
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