Mistress of beauty,
Lady of desire,
Lost in a mist of clouds and dust,
An ocean into everlasting night,
White skin like porcelein,
Toffee coloured eyes,
Red lips drip rasberry into uncharted waters,
Gown of snow billows in the feathery air,
Like fingertips that brush delicate skin,
Raven hair cascades over slim shoulders,
As she walks through clouds of satin,
Contrasting her body against the pale blue sky,
She was one to follow,
She was beauty to behold,
Dissappeared into golden sun,
A diamond without a ring,
Fallen into setting sun,
Rising new moon.
By Errin Hellingrath
Author notes
hope you guys like this.
A contest entry
- PICTURE INSPIRED POEMS by ennovy.
750 points, ended January 26, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hey give me some feedback guys?
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Very good write I enjoyed reading it!
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Energetic imagery, you gave the pic life. Nicely done, good luck in the contest and thank you for entering.
Novy & Brazos -
*Closes Jaw and regains composure* Well... The imagry is... Well, maybe a little to well done. I coulda sworn you where describing a victoria's secret commercial, except you leave room for imagination, which leaves for undeniable beuty in the eyes of any reader. I love it, very well done, Errin.
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beautiful write i like it very much good luck
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This is a good imagry poem.Could picture every line.Very good take on the picture prompt.Although I am in the same contest I like yours too.Good luck to you.
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