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Christine

She was
...
beautiful
Simply put in one word
And it was natural
Her dreams
reached higher than the clouds
Her kindness touched everything
She was
beautiful
inside and out

Only
some people didn't see it
or maybe they did
and were jealous

He saw it
He saw her and wanted her
despite that she was taken

He wouldn't take no for an answer
So he took her
grabbed her and ran
and Christine
beautiful loving Christine


we lost her


Maybe being so beautiful
was her only downfall

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Name: Christine

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 29, 2009

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    Thank You for Your Entry ~

    Damn! Found myself near tears as I felt the loss of Christine, I wanted to reach out and find her before she got hurt - her beauty being the reason of her death ... shocking and deeply penned


    Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda