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a race



you stared
at the silky
material of my shorts
as I circled the track.
I wait, wanting
your whistle.



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19 words.
peace to all ~flight

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    January 13, 2009
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    Seems almost a crush - but perhaps I am reading too much into it.

  • piggyback
    January 13, 2009
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    Wow. This is awesome. Love the brevity, the imagery, and how you leave us thinking...