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Oops, I slipped!

Ouch.
That's what comes to mind.
I'd start to curse,
But breath is hard to find.
I guess that's what happens
When falling from a tree,

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    January 26

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    Haha cute! Creative, great title and nicely structured. Thank you for entering this

  • bookworm987
    January 25

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    hahahaha

    I literally "lol"-ed when I finished reading this. I've never personally fallen from a tree, but I can imagine it would be something like this.

    [Liz<3]