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Ruby

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Ruby isn't the average kind of girl
She doesn't play the games
She makes them

She lives a life of mystery
Prefering to hide in the shadows
Where no one can find her without her willling it

Ruby loves to dance
But she can't find
The right partner

Because in her arms they
Would wither away, not sustaining life
From the breath she sucked out of them

Living on the edge constantly
She's never really stable
Only in dreams

No one understands
The little girl she trully is
They just see the twisted figure she doesn't know how to hide.

Author notes

Prompt: "Ruby"

I know this may seem a little twisted and not my usual write, but I wanted to try something different. The prompt/name inspired me to write about someone struggling in life, who wants to be seen as normal but doesn't know how so she just seems wicked to the world.

[pic of me, taken by me, and photoshopped by me]
♥ Kathraina

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 29

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    Thank You for Your Entry ~

    I love the picture you added; very cool touch

    I like the darkness and simplistic feel of this - the first stanza caught my attention and held it all the way through
    Excellent write on Ruby


    Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 13
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    Wow, so profound and well written!