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*~ Helena ~*

 

 

 

 

 

 Another swallow, acceptance burned 
          blame down esophagus

               into damn built

from sweat laced gloves claws framed;
        thumbs crossed at seams

       to assure access controlled
              by her conductor.


       Stature charred slim chance
  to escape when routes blocked, rite
        of passage pleasured in red;

             knotted linen foraged.


Seven tricked into adulthood


    with clown mask manipulated
         so baby soft remnants
               disseminated,


           testosterone tested.


      Overdose of rabid affection
                  instigated


             death dependency.




Author notes

Prompt: Helena


Child Pornography- Sick-Twisted

Deliverance of Death to a young child's Spirit-

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    November 3

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    excellent

    Awesome poem sis
    An eye opener for sure....
    No child should be treated like this
    Congrats on the Silver Trophy
    Trying to catch up
    Son is on here most of the time
    He gives me 2 hrs.......sighs
    Hope all is well with you
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 29

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    Thank You for Your Entry ~

    Oh my

    This just leaped off the page and hit my heart breaking it in a million pieces as I felt for Helena and the abuse she had to endure


    Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 21

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    Ooh....such incriminating treatment of our little children..You portray vividly the forcefulness on their vicitims, and why do we wonder that many are scarred for life! As always you dramatically characterize these who prey and the little ones...Masterful write! Beautiful, sweet soul...always a challenging inspiration reading your work! with Rosemary


  • islekine gold member
    January 15

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    Whoa!

    Wicked write, my friend! Nothing worse than someone taking advantage of a child...no matter what age...
    some adults have such a child like innocence they too can be taken advantage of....geez...you really made me think on this one. You have such wonderful imagery...
    Write on!
    Best wishes in the contest, and always.
    Love, light, and blessings my friend!



  • maralisa silver member
    January 13
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    me come back beautiful maralisa

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