a glare
on the window
i imagined
you standing there
soft smile
across my face
for a moment
i felt you near
Author notes
sorry its not under 20 words
A contest entry
- shorts by Melissa Gayle.
600 points, ended January 13, 2009, 13 entries
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Comments
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This kind of reminded me of my grandfather who has passed. It has a sense of longing.
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Despite it not being under twenty words....It is powefully full of imagery....Excellent!
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