every minute your not here my heart misses a beat
with out you i am not truly complete
i will not let the distance destroy us
we are stronger, i promise not to put up a fuss
if we are together through all this stress
then we will make it through to once more feel a caress
just keep your head down it will be all over soon
so you can act once more like a buffoon
with out each other our hearts are offbeat
we can not throw our hands up in defeat
just keep on trudging in that hellhole over there
and we will keep this relationship under repair
so one day soon we can be together again
for you my love is on the end of a chain
my heart dog tag that is to be given back
when you get back off that bus from Iraq
Author notes
well...i think the poem speaks for itself..i have a man in Iraq..as well as some friends too...and well...yeah...i thought you might enjoy this...
A contest entry
- Of Love and Longing... by SithHappens.
1750 points, ended January 28, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A very heart felt write here
Bless their hearts and yours honey and know those in the service today are held by the highest standrds in my heart indeed .God Bless them all and bring them home safely when it is possible for our world to heal and find peace once again .
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It must be very painful
And I can feel that in the poem. Thank you for your entry
~Sithy -
I know what it was like being over there. I know how hard the relationships can be while your over there. Hope he comes home soon after a job well done.
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