After the gifts are unwrapped
and the ribbons have been pushed aside,
I'll be there to hold you
when you begin to cry.
I'll take you in my arms
and wipe the tears away.
I'll kiss your lips
and keep the tears at bay.
When everyone has gone
and left your side.
I'll be there to hold you
when you want to hide.
I'll take your hand in mine
and give you whats due
And with this ring, make your every
birthday wish come true.
Author notes
Ok so I wrote this shortly after reading my Beloved Carrie's poem "Birthday Wishes"
Which can be found here:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4949215
This one's for you Carrie
Please tell me what you think
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Awww this is so sweet!!! I love it so much... Carrie is really lucky yo have a guy serenade her with his words the way you do!! Bravo...
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its breathtaking
great job
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oh how terribley cute i love it
good job
~~chef W.B
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Justin...
This is truly wonderful! What a wonderful response to Carries poem! You did great on this one! I see how much she loved this one! You two are soooooo good together! Keep that girl smiling!
I love you both!
and love
Mom
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What a beautiful way to make her see that she is adored
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I Love you Justin. I love how you're always here, and How you can always put that smile back on my face. Thankyou for this poem. You turned my birthday around.
Strange how I knew you would be able to do that before I even wrote my poem. Then again, I figure its not that strange, consitering. Consitering how much you care, how much we fit together better than a perfectly pieced together puzzle.
This is why I wake up each day. I wake up each day just to hear from you.
I'll forever love you <3
-Your Northern Star
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