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my place

i see his warm loving arms
i smell his sweet clone
i hear his voice
i feel his arms when they close around me
i taste the wind as he walks me home
and
i think this is just where i want to be

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this is another type of poem i had to write for school... its about my boyfriend. he makes me so happy. hope you like it.

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  • Elvenfairy
    March 19

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    yeah, I remember feeling this way with my ex boy friend. Unfortunatly he dumped me, so I will never again feel that way with him. Oh well, I'll find someone else eventually I'm sure. My campus is flodded with guys. Anyways nice poem.

    • thanks i just re read it and me and him broke up a wile ago and i;m still frinds with him but i remember just how much i miss his hugs


  • judy-clarinetist
    January 12
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    i did like it and its very cute. its nice to have someone that makes you happy

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