And yet
in
his lips
my
divinity
exsits
not yours~
Author notes
10words
A contest entry
- He's mine! by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended January 13, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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LOL. That was absolutely perfect for the contest you wrote it for. Incredible.
Write on.
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Oh YES! This is exactly how I feel about my husband of 36 years. I would annihilate anyone who tried to come between us. Literally! LOL Your brevity speaks volumes. Excellent and so worthy of the merit received. Congratulations!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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endearing..
the words have more meaning and power than the length of the piece displays, not surprising to me this is excellent.
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My
Short and powerful. belief, in these times often frowned upon. But in the end we all call on our God I think. But oh the innocence of children. So very pretty poet.
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This is a fantastic take on the image.
Splendidly done and well deserving of silver
Thanks for sharing your poetic talent.
Best of wishes to you inall you ever do.
Tony
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This is wonderful ^_^
Great twist of tone with the ending.
Congrats on your silver
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this is fabulous!!.. x
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wow.. your font and the picture and everything goes so well
beautiful..... i just done like the background colour.. it annoys my eyes
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A - This is beautiful! Wonderful take on the picture. At first I read: my divinity exists, which is also nice! LOL
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chuckles...oh that face is a priceless one worth more than words, but your words sum up the rest of it so very well. C
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Excellent
Much truth to this message. A great job. Don
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Thanks Don..long time no see my friend. Hope all is ok
Amarige
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