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I am in love

It was something I felt
It touched me so well
A feeling of warmth
A feeling which seems not to end
A feeling that takes me
To a place far away
A place where words are whispered
The things they say
are
Indeed the things the say
A place where my heart
Beats faster and faster each day
and you and I become one
and our love never fade away
A feeling I tell
If you never felt it before
A feeling of falling in love
A growth
A warmth feeling
An unending feeling
I am in love...

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  • LionessK silver member
    January 13, 2009

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    welcome to allpoetry

    Yes there is nothing like it... to fall in love.
    You may want to check over this, I noticed a few typos.
    I like the way you let your heart speak here. Very open and sweetly written.

    Enjoy the site.