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When One Lives to Dream

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When two people love deep

their hearts connect in a Jeep

as he picks her up for a date

and leaps with hope  and rate

her as his 100% universe instead

of his world.

Their eyes glow with pride, adoration

and complete respect of trust and faith.

As they dance in each others arms, never

missing a step or stomped on toes, he

took her on a picnic of  complete romance

and helped her sit on a blanket out in the

desert as she requested.

With great love he gave her a tour of his

beautiful state and asked nothing in return.

Can one ever top this as her requests were met

and then she returned home to her world of

turmoil.

She still smiles as her dreams come alive.

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something every lady dreams of, and prays for to happen one day

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  • sunshinegirl
    January 16

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    Sounds like the dreams that one seems to lose track of when their hearts are shattered I can relate to some here, only never got to know...*sigh* You did a great job on this one!

    Best of luck in this contest!


  • Anthony-
    January 13
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    Beautiful. I like the way in which it seems to explore dreamscapes of a human being and at the same time being firmly planted in a reality or a need for a reality. I loved the way in which you have placed "she requested" as an action that the woman was to complete - her point of view, her desires. The world of turmoil almost hit me like a truth hits one after daydreaming.

  • Frozentearz
    January 13
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    I agree it is something every lady dreams off
    Thanks for sharing,
    warm thoughts
    Frozentearz

  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    January 12
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    excellent~

    Love how you penned this sis...
    From picking her up in a Jeep...a tour...a picnic a dance...Love and adoration so complete....
    Then comes home to the world of reality....but she still smiles as her dreams come alive....
    Love this
    Should be in a contest...
    It would be a winner......
    Love the pic too
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~