Traveling through water can be uncertain
But these especially if they are hidden behind a curtain
It strikes a type of fear
It makes people scream, but because of the curtain many cannot hear
Those screams roll like thunder
And after awhile the few who can hear wonder
What great detest hurt them all?
How did so many fall?
But one day someone will appeal
And one day they will all heal
A contest entry
- word bank and title options by shecantstopfalling..
600 points, ended January 21, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do u think?
Comments
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this dwealt on an unchratered territory...I loved it...guess you may find fresh ones on my page that may catch up with your line of thinking -
I like that "How did so many fall?" because thats a question Ive been asking for a while. You havent put the option in the AN and Im sorry I didnt ask you to do that earlier. I kind of didnt notice... anyway thankyou and goodluck
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