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Leaves' Lives

last year's leaves left in heaps
a forest nymph contemplates their stories
lying in their sepulcher with the dreams they had
when they were still green

A contest entry

Leafy goodness.

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  • doolie gold member
    January 26
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    Very nice write. Congrats on your silver trophy.


  • KyleBerg gold member
    January 26

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    Oh, the lives of leaves.. such a fascinating idea. Wonderful imagery; and loved the last line. Nicely done.

    Thank you