This time I thought I'd never see,
A failure of such low dignity.
Face to face and fist to cheek,
You think I'd let you go that easy?
Step aside and let me handle HER first.
She has no part in this, But if you wish.
I'll burn that bitch's hair out and push her eyeballs in;
Pull that ring out of her lip,
Mine looks better, hers looks like shit!
It's time to slice and dice her face,
A million little pieces.
If you'd like a number more precise,
Then six hundred sixty-six.
I feel like it's time to show you up,
You like that "piece" of manliness?
Well here, come now and give it up!
A sad picture, but non the less
So entertaining to me and the rest.
I loved you forever and tried to forget,
Then you gave me this precious,
Precious gift.
A baby boy for me to love;
As you sat back and denied
All of the above.
Now rest in peace,
Or pieces shall I say?
Guess what dear friend,
You should have ran away.
Now I suppose,
You have finally paid.
Author notes
I'm a crazy EX!
Seriously though, ex boyfriend of mine, wanted a child, left me when i got pregnant.. and is now "bleeping" a former friend of mine.. traitors all around ya know? But to keep it short... I would kill him. with all of my force, and that stupid ... you know : )
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You really spoke it out!
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heh
well if i let it ALL out.. i'd be writting stories.. dont worry tho i'll be adding many many more of him on here.. cause he's an ass.
thank you tho it made me feel good to write it out.. a little bit at least 
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WOW!!
This is a very good write.. and im very surprised you are holding back in this write... I would of went all out... I guess its great that you can keep in your anger but there are times when you need to let it all out and go after the problem on full force... I bet if i was in your position i would of start beating the hell out of him without thinking of the consequeces... You did such a good job... Im very happy he has brought you wonderful precious baby!!! Im very happy for you, but as for him, he can rot in hell and pay for what he did to you and his own child!! how could he even deny all the above... Its bullshit...Im always here for you if you need to talk.. i tend to give good advice Keep up the great work and good luck in my contest!!!
Shannon*Leah
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Such strong emotion in your words. I've been there quite some time ago though minus the pregnancy. I could relate to everything you said and felt your pain and anger on many levels.
The ex is a waste. The baby blessing.
Great write. Good luck in the contest.
If spelling counts you may want to change "bitches" to "bitch's". Just returning the favor
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thanks
hah. thanks. I usually find a bunch of mistakes later after reading it a million times then I'm like wow.. I'm dumb!
HAH thanks a lot
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