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may sweep the stakes---

Inundating frightening dreams
ignite the lights of desire.
Reality always may taste sour
unlike sweet cookies.
Hopes with destined goals
only may sweep the stakes
when trek on determined path

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    January 26

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    I found it slightly difficult to grasp the meaning of this piece. However, I did very much enjoy the imagery and the power of it.

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