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My Sister

Though we have no blood ties
Our hearts together are bound
Lost to everyone outside
Our words within our hearts are found

No one else will kill you over something big
Or cry harder over something sad
Or laugh longer at your goofyness
Or have the memories we had

We will make more, I know
Our hearts the way will show
So dry those tears, my friend
Take this road with me, without end

For even when death or Rapture sing
Within our hearts we will forever be
When one's soul takes her flight
The other's will watch through that night

For the day when they will reunite
In each other's arms be again
With God, the angels, & Jesus our Light,
I will forever & for always be with my best friend.

Author notes

Dedicated to the best friend God could give with skin on: Ann Marie Campbell

Inspired by & in response to her poem, "Who Am I?"
www.allpoetry.com/poem/4467781

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    July 12

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    This is so beautiful I loved it Its awsome you put God Jesus and the Angels in thisForever and always best friend. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece


    • SunDew
      July 12
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      shy little lamb

      Many thanks, my friend. Thank you for reading it.


  • freespirit51
    January 24

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    Beautiful poem my friend. I know the feeling that you write about as I too have someone whom I feel as you do. She is my friend , my sister, my best friend, we are soul sisters and she is the other half of my heart. She is twilightPanther and she is very special to me. great write

    • SunDew
      January 25
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      freespirit51

      Our dear TwilightPanther is such an awesomely sweet soul, isn't she? She is my "Sweet Sister" on here. It makes me happy to know that you, too, have found that most special of friends; someone who knows your heart without you having to tell them & lessen it with mere words.

      Niaish!
      ~Bright

  • PureCountry
    January 22

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    The Bonds

    given to us of others in the passing through of life always come with a purpose. To encourage, strengthen and to love as He loves us from above.

    Your words do honor to all that is required.

    Thank you for sharing

    Silent Hawk


    • SunDew
      January 23
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      silent hawk

      I agree, new friend of mine. Thank you for your kindness.

      ~Bright


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    January 21

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    just beautiful! to have such a friend is a blessing heaven sent...wishing you joy, peace and much happiness

    • SunDew
      January 21
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      twilightpanther

      Yes, she is a big blessing in my life. No one could ever convince me it wasn't God that brought us together as we are. We didn't even like each other before we became best friends. Then, overnight - voila! - we're inseparable. Niaish, dear Sis, & I hope the same for you.

      ~Bright

  • judmc
    January 20

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    Sweet poem

    A nice endearing, sentimental poem portraying the loyalties within a relationship of two inseperable sisters
    as friends a highly commendable poem...George....

    • SunDew
      January 20
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      george

      Thank you for this second comment on my poem! Lol, I'm sure you didn't realize you'd already commented, but having someone double-comment is nice. Thanks for reading & commenting!

      ~Bright


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    January 17

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    Niaish Ma eno from all your Children

    This is a beautiful tribute to someone that you have met in life and who contributes to this, and yet you have no blood ties.
    I found peave and faith in your words. And hope

    Shari

    • SunDew
      January 18
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      shari

      My soul is perfectly content & happy with her by my side. I have no emptiness when she's near. It's good all those things are able to find my readers. I hope it made you feel the day was a little better, a little brighter. Thank you so much for your uplifting words.

      ~Bright

  • judmc
    January 17
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    Splendid

    A beautiful heartfelt poem about eternal friendship
    come rain or shine you'll always be my friend is a wonderful sentiment admirably expressed in this well
    written poem with some lovely imagery and rhyme.
    .... George....


  • LittleMoon silver member
    January 17

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    That is a really lovely write for your friend. Even more important though is the friendship that you have. Cherish it and it will last a lifetime. I have only seen my "best friend" twice in over 45 years but we still hang in there, that bond is still strong, time and distance mean nothing. I wish that for you and your friend. Sheila

    • SunDew
      January 17
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      sheila

      I thank you, not just for this comment of nice words, but for the support you showed when I was down over not being able to see her. You are so kind! May all those you encounter be as nice to you.

      ~Bright


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    January 15

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    These words convey a partnership of sisters that can never be broken. One that keeps the shine on the happiness both bring to each others lives. A great dedicated write and a fantastic show of the heart, well done indeed. Thank you for sharing with us, and I know she'll love the thoughts that come with it.

    • SunDew
      January 16
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      many thanks

      My dear brother, you have hit the proverbial nail on the head. Our bond is strong...& we are very close, in our hearts if not in distance. She now lives 3 hours away from me - the closest we've ever lived since we parted physical ways. We are happiest when we can see each other, but we feel a shadow of that happiness when we talk on the phone or chat online or text each other.

      Thank you so much for reading & the comment.

      ,
      Your Wee Sis,
      ~Bright


  • UnManned4Ever
    January 14

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    " No one else wil kill you over something big" Is that a threat?! I think I am going to cry! This is really sweet " Chelle. Great write. Cant wait till I do see you again. Dont worry, it will be before the rapture takes place unless that is soon and then I appologize in advance! *hug

    • SunDew
      January 14
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      of course it's not a threat! It's a promise. It warms my heart that you like it, though I know you would.

      It better be. Apology NOT accepted!!!

  • SoulWhispher
    January 13

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    This is a most wonderfull tribute to your sister, a friend forever, you have penned a most wonderfull poem that touches the heart, great job, blessings John


    • SunDew
      January 13
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      my dear friend

      Thank you so much for your words. You are so kind to me.

      ,
      ~Bright


  • Shakes-spear
    January 12

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    wonderful

    to have someone to be there for you through thick and thin. To have a friend, you must be a friend and it sounds like you both fit the bill! I'm proud of you and Dewey. You make me happy everyday! Love and kisses to the both of you! Uncle Shaker

    • SunDew
      January 12
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      Thank you! I believe we do.... God made us best friends one night & it stuck! Kinda like everything else He does... I have worried that our friendship will fizzle as suddenly as it began, especially over the trial of not seeing each other, but I always hope for it to never end.

      I'm loved! You think about us everyday? Oh we are loved so much! We love you too & send kisses & s back!

      ~Bright

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