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Sick Child



Slipping into puddles
my fingers are frigid
with anticipation

I singe the carpet
with a sour cigarette
this being is sallow

With weary wings
they plow through the ozone
oiled feathers from 1996

Clutching my knees to my chest
fear creeping down my spine
like an icy serpent

...What if my heart stops beating?


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  • hks
    January 21
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    yeah.

    pretty sick.

    [:!


  • StickyNote5
    January 19
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    this is extravigant... everyone else took the good words. this is really good

  • I agree with Gwen. amazing


  • peregrin
    January 12

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    This is brilliant...
    It is so... dark, and yet, kinda hopeful. I like it, and I am feeling it.
    It is pretty, and yet, something I wish never to happen, you know?


    That made no sense...
    Oh well


    Gwen