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My Cure

I have come far to close to the edge now.
As I look down, I see them.
A billion others on the ground, lay lifeless
This scene it, disturbs me.
Yet it is what will become of me.
If I should choose to proceed on.

This feeling consumes me, an emptyness unfillable.
This is my darkest time and yet it is, repeatable.

So as I brace myself for the journey, down.
A quiet voice begins to speak to me.
Calling me, hauting me.
It beckons me to hold my ground.
To not lot go of everything.
So calming, so warming.
Its like this being knows me...
So bewildered I, call out.
Wanting only for its embrace.
To erase

This hole in me!

And as I call out
I have no doubt
That I've found something
To ease my narcasism and negativity
And as I step back
I know now that I'm one less
Enchained by this horrid decadence
And now live with hope and reason

The cure for me!

Author notes

I wrote this for my class. We had to describe redemption in our lives. So this is what I wrote.

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