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I miss you


I miss you
...
Is that too hard to hear?
I miss hearing your voice on the phone, 'cause that's all that I've got
Is that too much to say?

I lay before you my bare soul, I let you know all that I feel
and you get mad that I'm nagging
How is that you loving me?
How is that you caring for me?

I miss sleeping to the sound of your thoughts
I miss sleeping to the sound of your dreams
and I don't understand why that you turn it all around
and why you make me feel bad for missing you

...

I miss you

And I love you very much
and the absence of your voice makes me think staff
makes me think that you don't want me anymore
that I have done something wrong
makes me think that you don't miss me

do you?

do you?

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