lovely...
she's so lovely
one swipe with a knife
and she'll be at my mercy
maybe-with any luck-
she'll be better
than last night's
...
she's not crying
or begging
I can fix that.
"I want pain!
show me you're in pain!
make me work for you"
she writhes in agony-
she has no finger
and still no tears
I can fix that.
"GIVE me pain!
Show me you're in pain!"
she's shaking-
she has no toes
frustrated-
I need pain
I slice my own throat
flying..
pain brings a certain satisfaction
am I smiling?
she's crying..
Author notes
5) Write a poem that the serial killer wrote.
A contest entry
- Demented Minds Arrive by Eots.
6000 points, ended February 5, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - AP Nemesis by Umi Juvariel.
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Comments
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This was entertaining. I couldn't quite follow it until I read your authors notes, then it made sense. This was a wonderful piece. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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Thank you for reading!
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Dark. I like it. It's a bit confusing, but when you think about the source, it very much could be something like this. Very nice. Good luck and thanks for the entry.
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Thank you!
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i like it. i like how unorganized it is, and it really does seem to capture the mind of a serial killer...
i love the last two lines! they leave such an impression...
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wow that is dif. i cant get all the word out of my head it was amazing keep up the great work.
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Thank you!
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wow this is really nice, it feels so sadistic
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lol, thanks. :]
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