Your throat cradled
the demons that plauged
saturday morning cartoons
where insecurities
hatched imaginary friends
and suicide notes
hung from apple tree,
where childhood
dreams lay rotting
between flesh and core,
as life became earth
Author notes
Option 1
A contest entry
- 10/35/30 QUICKIE by Ziola.
700 points, ended January 12, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I really enjoyed this poem. The title fits in pretty well and your descriptions are amazing. Very blunt and fun to say the least but I loved it. You've got a nice head on your shoulders yes. AMAZING WRITE
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hahah, i love this one! i love your style with words! its quite genius
"where insecurities
hatched imaginary friends
and suicide notes
hung from apple tree,"
that is SO brilliant, i think i am most definitely jealous i never came up with that. i love how the title ties in with those lines as well.... VERY nicely done!
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love the take on prompt. this is so visual, ty for entering, bravo
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what an interesting take on prompt! i enjoyed the imagery in this poem. apple is a wicked fruit. good luck in the contest! =)
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oohhh, wow, i really like this, very descriptive, and nice. good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥ -
*shudder* That was creepily, terrifyingly amazing! It may be only 35 words...but it's like a fully crafted story.
Good luck in the contest!
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This was amazing. I can't believe how beautiful this is in so few words. You did a fantastic job. Good luck in the contest!
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very dark and deep write, great job
Best of luck to you
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