Because my hearts breaking
While yours is healing
I'm falling apart in your arms
While you remain completely calm
What do i do to stop the pain
Neither of us were the ones to blame
All I can think about is you leaving
And how i cant shake the feelin
I'm completely devastated that you wont be around
Walkin around in a world of my own staring at the ground
Thinking how much im gonna miss you
Wondering what happened to us to
But there nothing i can say that my tears haven't already said
I wish this was just a dream and really im lying next to you in bed
And all I really want to say to you
Is please dont leave, it shouldnt be through
I should have told you how much i was in love
How for you id make the stars shine above
And once you leave im afraid you wont come back
Coping without you is a skill i lack
I cant think about you going without crying
And if i said i was fine im afraid i was lying
I did it for the best of intentions
And until you come back ill be hanging in suspention
I want this to end like a fairytale and we end up together
But i wouldnt want you to let go of your dreams for my hopes of forever
Just know that there wont be a day that goes by that i wont think about you
Because I never have and never will stop loving you
A contest entry
- Emotional Tides by Sai Amartya.
530 points, ended January 18, 44 entries
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Comments
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Very nice Write. I like it very much.
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that was great


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I do believe this is a new one as well my dear....very good. far too sad, but very good. I think this links quite nicely to our conversation the other day about how you never know what you've got till its gone, n once its gone you can never get it back, or have the same thing with another person......hmmm..now you've made me go all thinky :s lol. I think I'm off to write something about the subject whilst I'm in the mood
nicely written dude, woop! xx



