Silence surrounds,
Envelopes,
Consumes.
Unable to be free,
Forbidden to confess.
Gagged by my hope...
My freedom.
Set apart from life.
Wrapped up in misery's tale.
Subconscience contrains,
Held back from within.
The truth hidden.
Author notes
Picture prompt: http://indigochildren.deviantart.com/art/Silencio-by-FreakyBabe-71820880
35 words
This makes sense to me...don't know about the rest of you though 
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Comments
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This is an awesome write. I love the imagery and the metaphors. I could feel the pain too. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest
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wow, this is such a seemingly simple poem, but holds so much depth and darkness in such poetic words.
your imagery is amazing, and to be honest, at times kind of scary.
Gagged by my hope...
My freedom.
this line in particular really got to me, the imagery and feeling of your words actually making me grab my throat cos I felt momentarily like i was actually gagging or choking... it takes a very precise talent to be able to envoke that type of feeling into your readers!
Thank you for your entry into my contest and thank you for sharing!
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very deep write. i love the picture that you put with the poem to. it goes well with it. great job on all the tropies that you have won with this poem.
kaycee
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deep sad write the picture go's well dark very dark amazing work well written made me shiver scary so much with so few words
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wow very deep..love the poeticness
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wow, dark, but very good!!!! GREAT WORK!!!
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well the title and poem do make sense to me, too. truth is scary sometimes and poor lady for having to go through this. well done. good luck in the contest! =)
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Ooo I like your take on this better than mine
Great job, I loved "Unable to be free,
Forbidden to confess." that was a cool line
Good luck!
Claire x
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Very nice take on the picture! I am so in awe of how amazing these writes can be in so few words. You really did the prompt justice. Good luck!
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wow, this is so great, and such a flow, it pick sup so quickly, it works so well with your words though, great job and good luck
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I really liked this! I really loved your take on the prompt, it was so well written. Hope you do well in the contest!
Take care
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A wonderfully dark ands well penned take on the prompt. Great emotion and language. A most enjoyable read,a dn best wishes in the comp
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Ohh, i really like this, this is so how im feeling always
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amazing job on the prompt...loved the format of the write as well
best of luck
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