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"A Dream of Raven"

I had looked into your eyes
to see what was a tear.
I know not where it came from,
your face
now red
and damp.
But your lips are pressed to mine
as mine against yours.

                  A soft sob hushed
                  beneath my lips
                  is gone.

I open my eyes
to find myself
upon my bed,
alone.

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