Bleeding trees
reflect her sorrow
as she rapidly loses the will
to fight another day.
She remains incompetent
as she rests
in what will be her grave.
She's ready,
it's only a matter of time.
Author notes
Prompt: http://indigochildren.deviantart.com/art/Silencio-by-FreakyBabe-71820880
35 words.
I hope it's ok. 
A contest entry
- 10/35/30 QUICKIE by Ziola.
700 points, ended January 12, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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That is also a nice little poem. Oh, I think I'll give up and go to bed. Enjoying poems, giving not so enjoyable comments, I've had enough of this day. The end of that sentence was not linked to the first half of it. In fact, it didn't make much sense, since I've had quite a good day.
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Haha, I love your comments.
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wow thats how im feeling bout now so to read it really makes me think. Good Poem
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poor lady! =) waiting for her own death, whoo dark and scary, that's for sure. thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! =)
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aw, this really pulls...great job, i love the emotional draw. good luck
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ohh, wow i felt the feeling of giving up on this one.
She's ready, so sad. ty and wonderful write -
*cry * Beautiful take on the prompt
She's ready,
it's only a matter of time
*double cry*
Good luck in the contest!
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