kidnapped, blindfolded,
immobilized, and imprisoned
in ghastly white forest,
silently screaming in Chinese
fear creeps in her weak heart
thumping in sickeningly grace
pray hard for old curse to lift
or succumbs to early death.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- 10/35/30 QUICKIE by Ziola.
700 points, ended January 12, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter What Ever You Want (No Erotica) by fairytalelovestory.
923 points, ended January 21, 95 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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the use of vocabulary is so perfect! every word used, just fits with the meaning, and heightens the sense of fear.
it paints a haunting picture, but its beautiful at the same time. great job, thanks for entering! -
some interesting symbolism here..intended or not..repression, and abject fear..
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Great stuff!!!
Short & sweet...
So much expressed in so few words, projecting a chilling image in the mind of the reader...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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The imagery of your words are haunting put them together with the picture and its frightening as well. An excellent take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest you did a great job. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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thank you
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wow, i love the darkness in this write, nice and creepy, great job on prompt, ty for entering
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I really like this take on the prompt. I found it unique and mysterious. A wonderful take on the prompt, and best wishes in the comp
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I really liked this, it was so well written. It was so unique and I loved reading it.
I hope that you do well.
Take care
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Very interesting take on the prompt. As a fan of Asian horror, I have to appreciate this, especially the title. Well done.
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oh, this is very intresting, and now that you mentioned chinese, i do see it
wonderfully doen and good luck
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Nice word choice
The title was defiantly interesting...I do love how the words, "Supernatural Chair" doesn't actually appear in the poem. (Guilty of that myself) Great write!
Good luck in the contest!
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