Satin sheets swaddled with
intricate intoxication;
Sadist among nymphs
Shelter her anger; within your lust
Release accompanied amidst consequence
Fierce intensity; rising hungrily
Cries resonate; souls unyielding
Exhausting creativity
Awakening; deserted
satiated
& bound
Author notes
Prompt: http://designersjunior.deviantart.com/art/Unconditional-Love-71325249
A contest entry
- 10/35/30 QUICKIE by Ziola.
700 points, ended January 12, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow, love the eroticness in this piece, dark, hurtful, and lustful, great job
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scary thoughts. i can imagine how much fear she has in that picture. nicely written. =)
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oohhh, this i nice, i really enjoyed, haha, especially the ending, stepping stairs ^-^
good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥ -
almost forgot the ninja ducks!
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Wonderfully penned take on the prompt!! Loved the movement and emotion in this piece. An ejoyable read, and best wishes in the comp
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I absolutly adore this - epecially the last stanza. The word choice is beautiful...as well as the contstuction.
Great take on the prompt and good luck in the contest!
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