If the prizm in the pic were a raindrop,
could you imagine the view.
How a spider sees not one but in eight,
raindrops what a muse .
Maybe that's why they are so jumpy,
to see so much indeed.
For when it rains he is attacked,
and every second its re-aranged.
Eight eyes I wonder why,
God blessed them so.
But being so small its no surprise,
they are so sneaky as they go .
Now a spider you just can't fool,
they are ever ready to duel.
Watches you even when you dont see,
they are only protecting themselves indeed.
But they can make a human jump,
even as big as we are.
For the spider has the upper hand,
with full circle radar.
Once I was driving out and about ,
and a jumping spider cam running out .
He was headed for the steering wheel,
and I shut her down and yelled no deal .
Right there in the intersection ,
I bailed out of the car in freight .
People honking and fussing so,
and I refused to drive.
A policman came and asked whats wrong,
and I pointed to the dash you see .
He saw that there spider was holding up the town ,
and reach reached in and smashed it for me .
I was a happy camper and piled back in,
and put that there car in drive .
And waved at the others,
for they would hve done the same thats right.
Author notes
What a day its a true story
A contest entry
- PICTURE PROMPT BY ADEMON by Ademon.
700 points, ended January 13, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BEST PREWRITTEN CHILDRENS STORY OR POEM by Snowing Kisses.
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Lol i hate spiders, love this poem
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LOL THIS IS A VERY CLEVER AND UNUSUAL WRITE INDEED, AND THE TITLE IS AWESOME
THANKS FOR ENTERING
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A true story!? This is a great ready and quite funny! nice take on the picture best of luck.
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Lol
I don't mind spiders but I know lots of people who freak out at them. That is so good!
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haha a wonderful take on the promt patty good luck in the contest
maralisa
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I never knew that spiders have eight eyes!
And your story is very funny. Once I had a little lizard in the car, lol.
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I had one of those days, and luckily I could pull over where it happened at, I have that fear of them. More the bigger ones though. You made me think of itsy bitsy spider song, lol, but I loved the rain drop visual. Blessings.
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don't mean to laugh at you but this was funny and so real to life..i remember growing up , my mom and sisters alike..were afraid of the tiniest spiders!! l.o.l. made them jump outta their skin too..good stuff my friend..
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