I'm talking to myself
Thinking out loud
Rubbing my eyes and looking around
Taking in the half-beautiful world
Seeing through my someone else's eyes
Or my own for the very first time
I've never screamed so loud
As I scream in my own mind
Open my mouth
No words fill the air
No words to explain it
No feelings to justify it
Hand on heart, I hate the lies
Hand over eyes, I hate all the obscenities
I don't know where I am
I Grew up too fast to understand all I told you
Too many dreams
Not enough balls to see them through
Not brave enough
Too risk to all like I want too
Do you blame?
Author notes
I've had this weird feeling lately, that I'm in the wrong place, wrong time, wrong person, wrong life? I dunno how to describe it really, but this is my best attempt.
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I agree with Lexi!
This piece is incredible darlen'!
&&&,
I love you, and you're in just the right place 'cause I'd go mad without you!
You fit in perfectly with us, as Lexi said
Lovely poem
loveyou,
xxxxxxxxxxx.
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It's brilliant, it really is.
Sure it could use a little smoothing over; i don't get the last line, but overall it's perfect
"I don't know where I am
I Grew up too fast to understand all I told you"
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"Rubbing my eyes and looking around
Taking in the half-beautiful world"
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"Seeing through my someone else's eyes
Or my own for the very first time
I've never screamed so loud
As I scream in my own mind"
i.love.it
as for the feeling, you fit in just perfectly with us, we wouldn't change you for the world.
loveyou,
xxx.
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