Tickle my belly,
Please give me a hug,
Tell me you love me,
Tuck me in snug as a bug...... {Please? why wont you? whats wrong with me?}
Can my read me a story?
Please mummy please,
Yes that is my favorite,
The princess and the peas.....{You wouldnt even know thats my favorite you dont care}
Now you dim down the light,
Say that it's time to sleep,
Aww mummy i dont want too,
But you tell me not to weap....{Ha! you just tell me to shut up and stop being a brat}
{yet you dont know why im so scared}
'I want to stay with you'
All happy and safe,
Because with out you right here,
It means i have to be brave...{Am i kidding..your never here, i always have to be brave}
Mummy i love you,
Do you love me too?
And you give me a kiss,
And say 'of course i do'...{love me?! how stupid must i be! love? you dont even know what that is}
So stroke on my head,
And sing in your soft sweet tone,
And i snuggle close in my bed,
So happy we're home.
'Good night my baby,..{sing to me?! the devils wife doesnt sing}
Have lovely sweet dreams,
Remember them for the morning,
And I'll explain what each of them means.'...{the only sweet dreams i have is this one...and it will never come true}
Then you close the door,
Its just teddy and me,
But i still get quite scared,
Because i am only three....{yer close the door...and never come back}
So you come back in,
Tell me all will be fine,
That your only downstairs,
And she gives me her 'sign'....{ha! the sign?!}
The wink of her eye,
And the pout of her lips,
Says 'you know that i love you',
With her hands on her hips....{more like the look of death if i dont shut up}
So i roll over to sleep,
And think of our great day,
Just my mummy and me,
Thats how it will stay....{yer right}
But now my dreamings over,
Im and my read mummy is back,
Your not like the mummy i wish for,
No your mad, about to crack.
And now you have left mummy,
Left me all alone,
All though your still here,
We are in the same home.
Mummy you dont get it,
There's a bad man in this world,
And he hurts me so badly,
I have to stay hidden and curled.
You just told me that you love me,
So why are you not there?
Why do you not help me?
Mummy my life is so unfair.
So please come back and hug me,
Please dont leave me on my own,
At lease wait until im older,
Please wait till im big and grown.
Mummy open up your eyes,
That is why you have them,
See how much im hurting,
Please see all of those men.
I will keep on dreaming,
For the mummy in my wish,
And maybe if im a good girl,
You'll give me that loving kiss.
Author notes
ok so i wrote the first one....nice/sweet/kind, now i give you the truth of the matter!
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I hope this doesnt trigger anything for any one. Please leave me a comment, good, bad, what ever you feel. Just please be a little sensative as they are all true stories about my life so far x
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i love the childlike innocence in your write. emotions and heartache spill from it. its a chilling reality to many children. please keep penning.
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like i said last time...MASTERPIECE
its just amazing how you mixed reality with dreams......amazing amazing amazinggggggg! 
thanks for the entry hunny...
miss you loads :'( xxxxxxxxxx -
no fair to make me cry!:'( *sniffles* great write, really.
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this almost brought me to tears!!! i'm so sorry your mother is such a bitch! my mom is too. i can't believe they can be so fucking stupid! its awful. my mom thinks she's so damn great, and then she goes and slaps me for nothing... i hate her so much. i wish you had a better mother that loved you more, you deserve it.
nice poem, too
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oh wow this was really sad
u wanted to cry
im sorry for your bad experiences
may the gods and goddeses be with you
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well done.. i found it to be well write and express.... real emotion is express .. you feel the word
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So Sad ='[
aww wow. i love the way you put this...MASTERPIECE! =] as always....love the way you kinda made it in a dream! well done! =] xxxx -
... Yeah, I understand that...
*hugs*
This is heartwrenching...
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aaww...this is heartbreaking! i love the way that your thoughts told the truth as you wished for the lies. that was genius (as you are!) and this was very very good. the rhythm was nice, and the flow was flawless. great job!
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=[ aww this is really sad. I love the way you've wrote it with the brackets contradicting her words and your wishes. It's really clever as sad as it is.
I wish maybe she would've seen and could've been able to stop what happened. It sucks that that little girl had to hurt so much... and still does.
x x x
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