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Fault

It's not my fault
I spillled the salt
The sudden halt
Within the vault.
A fresh assault
Which led to Walt
Won by default

A contest entry

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  • Poetess12
    January 13

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    You did a good job on this poem.
    the end line rhyme is really good.
    It's exactly what I'm looking for

    Thank you for your entry.