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She Disappears

You seem so far from me
as the leaves brush my face
I feel your presence
a dress of lace
where did you go?
gone with grace...

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    January 26

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    Oh, a nice sorrowful atmosphere you create with the imagery in this poem. Wonderful story and wording.

    Thank you for your entry