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Looking Closely

Doubt
something we all do
with ourselves
and with you

Nothing
seems to be real
so we question
for more appeal

Never
feeling secure
we search
for the doubtful cure

A contest entry

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  • carole21
    January 14
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    interesting comments . . thanks for the contest entry


  • XXxFAKExXx
    January 12
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    I can't really describe how much I loved this poem..
    So.. beautiful write!