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Such As It Ends

Cut
The knife...
Such beauty
The silver sings
It takes me over
I am one with the blade
It dances across your flesh
And reveals a lovely scent
You moan ever so softly
One carnivorous bite
Sweetness in your blood
This sadism
So perfect
You fade...
Death

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  • wanderingstarlet
    January 12

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    I like this. I'm listening to a song by Thousand Foot Krutch. Breath you in. or something like that. and i said it with the beat, and it almost makes this sound pretty.

    i'm crazy. hehe.

    i need to get out of writers block.

    <3