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Goodbye Love
Silent tears streamed down my face
As I said goodbye to love today
It left me but a broken shell
No hope of thriving, a descent into hell
I know this world in which I exist
Home again without a wish
Hope does not thrive, love has gone
This is where my heart belongs
This is what I know, it’s my world
Leave me now, let me alone
I would have slowly killed his soul
Taken from him beauty of love
I know now where I went wrong
I should never have strung him along
I have but one reason to move on
I will not destroy the love I have known
People do not love for long
It drifts away when life goes wrong
Moments of harshness, life is cruel
Fantasy Deception
A contest entry
- AP Family by A-muse-in-writer.
700 points, ended January 26, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great piece
This is true people dont love for long but sometimes that's up to you on ho long you want to be loved and that's by you loving the person the same amount of time Great Job.
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Great piece
This is true people dont love for long but sometimes that's up to you on how long you want to be loved and that's by you loving the person the same amount of time Great Job
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Awesome read. Very powerful, filled with such great emotions.
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Fantastic
This is a very deep piece with such meaning and a good rendtion of your character and your thoughts and feelings. Very well done and thanks for entering my competition.
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