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Enjoy the kiss of fate, till it's gone in the clouds

Dull and gray is what i see,
graceful and peacefull is what i think,
send thorns and stab my heart,
kisses of fate turn my way,
torturing the devil,
i will play his game,
let's turn up the heat,
and show our color,
dancing and flying, in the air
dancing on the trapeze with no net,
dangerous is a keen way to put it,
flying from bar to bar, jumping,
across the stage, striving,
striving to live, to keep alive,
not caring about the rest around us,
never going to fly away, Can't stop thinking
about you everytime, i kiss you on the lips,
growing faster and faster, the climax comes
quicker, quicker is the only word, it all
comes to a gracious stop, no one stares,
no one breathes, just on gasp sets it all off...
she come colliding off the bar,
for let's kiss this night away, tears are flowing
as if no one could tell, her heart is sent far above,
No roses were brought, no tears were shown,
not even a drizzle of sun had shown,
all they brought were the thorns,
she strived so hard to be the best,
pushing herself without a doubt,
yet all they bring her for her effort,
were the thorns of a blossoming rose.
Dull and gray is what i see,
graceful and peacefull is what i think,
send thorns and stab my heart,
kisses of fate turn my way,
shunned away was a girl without pride....

Author notes

this was a very random piece, not really there i guess you could say...it isn't really the shining star on my plate but i enjoyed writing it....

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Comments

  • Good concept you have here. Very interesting, I definately enjoyed this. Good luck in my contest.