One little white lie, what could it hurt
Lost my wedding band in the dirt
Looked for hours not finding a thing
That night he asked, where is your ring
Heart pounding, thinking fast on my feet
At the jewelers being clean, I say in deceit
The next day I bought another
One that looks exactly like the other
One little white lie, what can it hurt
Found it later in the pocket of my shirt
Author notes
By:
Background By: Little Eagle
Prompt #7 White lie
Gold
In a list
A contest entry
- (contest #192) Prompts contest by daviscth.
900 points, ended January 26, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - GIVE ME SOME LAUGHS!!! by Mrs D.
650 points, ended February 10, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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glad you found it
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Yes, now I have a spare.
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This is an excellent take on the prompt, but what I want to know, did it really happen??
A good poem in couplet form and congratulations on the gold, well deserved.
Sue
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Thank you Sue for your wonderful comment. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
No it didn't happen, thank god. Then again, maybe thats just a little white lie. 
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Grasshoper,
How did I miss this golden gem?
You did rhyme, just fine.
Joe
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I don't know Sparky. Maybe you were playing twister.
Thank You for your sweet comment.
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lol...lol.....
funny
thanks for entering
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Thank you Mrs D for the honorable mention. I'm pleased that you got a laugh out of my write.
Thanks for the fun contest.
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Aww this is sweet. And now you have a spare..lol. Beautiful piece, loving the rhyme...I am a huge fan of rhyme Good luck in the contest hunni
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Thank you so very much. I had alot of fun writing this one.
Of course now my hubby doesn't know when to beleive me or not.
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This is so cute with a moral! This little rhyming couplet poem shows your heart of a poet! Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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Thank you Amera. Your comment means alot to me.
You've been a wonderful teacher.
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a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest the background is beautifulmaralisa
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Thank's for stopping by and commenting on my poem.
Little Eagle has many lovely backgrounds and tags.
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Very funny ditty, but what were you doing to take it off to begin with sweetie?
Best wishes in the contest
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Hehehe If I told you, you probably wouldn't beleive me any way.
I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem.
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OMG!!! LOL This is such an adorable poem and I just loved the ending. You did a great job writing for this prompt and thank you for following the rule as well as for your entry.
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WOW!!! Thank you so much for the gold trophy. It pleases me that you liked my write enought to give it first place. You made my day Cathy.
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.
I'm glad you got a giggle out of it.
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I love this! Glad you found it not him LOL! Good luck in the contest hon
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Thank you sweetie for your lovely comment. I'm so you got a laugh out of it.
The ending might not have been so good if he found it. Hehehe
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