I like the way you smile in candle light.
I yearn for your soft warm cradled caress.
I love how you look in your crayon dress.
I know you will want to cuddle tonight.
I always try to make you come to those
rhythm and blues concerts covered with cream
and chocolate. I cherish your childhood dream.
I try to make you happy in cherry flows
where colors create new crazy patterns.
I cry when country songs carries you home.
I speculate for crisp kisses in return
for magical curtains carefully placed.
I know that crushed carnations speak alone.
I crave for love-makings naked embrace.
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if only more men were this way it would save alot of women alot of problems... *sigh*
you are stll a fabulous poet sweetie thanks for sharing it with the rest of us!
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beautiful
So beautiful my sweet adorable AP lover. Your words wrapped around my heart.
I loved every word you penned here in this write.The visuals were loving and beautiful, you took me on a sensual jouney into your soul of, your wants and needs.....
I crave for love-makings naked embrace.....
beautiful baby, just beautiful!
much love and happiness to you.
love always,
Your Angel xoxoxo
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Thanks Angel for the clapping dudes, I really enjoyed how this one came out. Much love to you also!!
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big smiley!
this is my best line, "I love how you look in your crayon dress" I am smilling as I write this. Good work and I love this. keep it tight and together!
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Thank you for reading and commenting on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Awww Charley. This is so beautiful. You want to be loved so bad. hugs.
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Thanks Guin for reading and commenting! always good to hear from you
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