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Mandala

Sand carvers paintings
engulfed in magic circles
mandala symbols

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This is not a new poem, however i've been unable to enter the contests here at AP lately using the pw option. So i have to copy and paste using the new poem option. I hope the reader can see that "sand carvers paintings" may not be perfectly circular.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • DogFish silver member
    October 2

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    Sand carvers paintings
    engulfed in magic circles
    mandala symbols

    effemorous as shaddows
    the light of dreams in our eyes