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?~why~?

these things i hear
mutated from an overwhelmed mind
the thoughts of suicide
of murder and hate
all revolve around this misunderstood soul
these thoughts of mine
are beginning to sound like voices
so clear and tricky
i want to listen but then again
............
they drive me mad
they know every thought
every action i may take
im so scared
and yet i can do nothing
to calm this overwhelmed suicidal mind
the self harming
the drugs
dont even help
i just wish i could understand
why im like this
why im treated so bad
why i cant even begin to understand
the problems in my mind
im just a misunderstood suicidal girl
living on this thing called insanity
...............

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okay im having a tuff time trying to understand whats going on and all i can do is come up with things to write ok

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  • xXBloodyravenXx
    February 1

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    I can really relate to this. It is sad but has a wonderful beauty at the same time. I really love this poem.

  • korryn
    January 12
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    i love it! Its very true? im going through that at the moment...very touching. take care (: xx


  • RamblingRose
    January 12
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    Wow. An honest, interesting poem. Look after yourself. X X X X X