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choosing one


looking upwards when lying down
puzzles for thoughts to fill my mind
the day's sun is softened by your shadows
entirely glad I chose a tree

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Fallen From Grace by my.life.in.lyrics from flickr.com

26 words

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    January 26

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    Ahh, lovely imagery! Love the subtle humour in the last line also -- great work.

    Thank you for entering


  • nordicsky silver member
    January 12

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    This one reminded me of beautiful images. I like to lie under beech trees on hot summer afternoons and watch the golden light filtering through the green leaves. Oh for summer days.

    Thanks for the thought.
    Love, Peter

    • carole21
      January 14
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      thanks

      thanks for the comments and applause on choosing one . .