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What Have I Done?

Disconnection

Raindrops roughly land
on rigid rocks

Suffocation

Claustrophobia commences

        shallow breath                                              relax
      fearful thoughts                                                  close your eyes
              muscles tightening                                let go

Waves of dizziness

Deep breath

Sign here
          and here
                    initial here
                            sign

Overwhelmed with regret

Author notes

An attempt to write my feelings out on paper. Releasing my bottled emotions, sip by sip.

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  • kirbysman Moderators member
    January 12, 2009

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    Whoa!

    Yes, as the R girl says, so glad to be reading again. This is different than the story indeed, lol. Well done, as I get a feeling of dread as I read it. Wow, briefly said, but oh so clear.

    OF & PD [remember that?]


  • Ishtar
    January 12, 2009
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    omfg, I am so glad to read! I am so glad! to read, you talented little talent beast thingy. What?!