under the midnight sky
from dusk till dawn
pulses beating in ebony darkness-
glowing embers
awaken sleeping memories
of yesterday...
breaking the silence,
waves crash against
moon lit pebbles-
angelic auroras
surrounding memories
to guide each day.
A contest entry
- the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 18, 362 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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breath-taking imagery here. this poem has a very ethereal and wonderful atmosphere. a pure delight to read
thanks for entering my contest!
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Wonderful
Oh my you did great with this one. So very well done. Congrats on the honorable mention.
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very nice poem momma i didn't understand some of the words but thats something you can teach me thank you for sharing this poem mommy I used the words very well
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This is really lovely in imagery and emotional originality. I like this from beginning to end.
Love,
Amera♥
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How beautiful ... so picturesque and fills the senses. Love it.
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This is beautiful, just like you are.
keep pouring your heart out, it is bring
the best out in you. You are amazing.
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Ooooooooooooooooh~
Now I Love how You penned this one Beautiful
Powerful imagery also adore the words: angelic auroras
Also that title
and the words: moon lit pebbles
Excellent once again Precious Spirit!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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